Thread:Spidersong18/@comment-34011996-20180508035931/@comment-34866013-20180508213628

I like the names! :D Here are some suggestions:


 * the name “Corenzeval’e” could be changed to Corenze, or Corenzal so it makes more sense :P


 * Decabesa could be “De Cabeza” so for example, “Morbius De Cabeza.”


 * Cielio can be changed to “cielo” that means sky, and is an actual name. :)


 * Dominic can be Dominico


 * The name “Carmisi” doesn’t sound very Spanish. :P Maybe change it to something like Carmila, Catalina, etc.

Hope this helps! :D